Soccer can save your life!!!
How can soccer help you? Playing soccer can safe your life. The kid called Jonah Gomez lives in Utah, US. He has
two blood disorders that any day can kill him. He is a fan of Real Salt Lake,
soccer team from the United States. He loves to play soccer and he is playing
for the Real Salt Lake Soccer Academy. He can't breath well and when he made sport he can suffer a relapse. His familiy doesn't had money to pay all his health problems so his recovering from his disease was so slow.
He has been playing for the Academy of Real Salt Lake and his health recovering has become a miracle. He nowadays pis playing better and also his health and fit is better and studies they made him said he has recover thanks to soccer. Also his family is getting better and can give more economical support to the boy because with the support from a TV program he became famous and also his family situation for recieveng help.
In conclusion soccer can safe your life. The practice of a sport has make his organism recover and become stronger to resist different situatuions. His organism was so weak but nowadays he is having a life as other kids with his age.
He has been playing for the Academy of Real Salt Lake and his health recovering has become a miracle. He nowadays pis playing better and also his health and fit is better and studies they made him said he has recover thanks to soccer. Also his family is getting better and can give more economical support to the boy because with the support from a TV program he became famous and also his family situation for recieveng help.
In conclusion soccer can safe your life. The practice of a sport has make his organism recover and become stronger to resist different situatuions. His organism was so weak but nowadays he is having a life as other kids with his age.
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